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Exercise 6 - Writing cohesive paragraphs for the CUNY-ACT Writing Test |
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Instructions: Click on the EDIT PARAGRAPH button to make the necessary changes to create
a cohesive paragraph. To see the essay topic, click on the SEE ACT TOPIC button. Click on
the HINT button if you need help.
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A college with famous professors will have higher enrollment
than one with well-equipped labs and mediocre professors. Students want to be taught by the
best professors the country can offer and to be inspired by their exceptional abilities. I
have read in an article that enrollment in the physics department of Darelton College increased
significantly after a distinguished professor of physics joined the faculty there. Since renowned
professors have accomplished so much and are well-versed in their field, they can easily acquire
research grants and involve their students in a variety of exciting research projects. For
students to be mentored by such famous teachers is greatly rewarding, and many would want
to enroll in a college that has famous professors on its staff. That is why it is necessary
for our college to hire these brilliant teachers. No doubt that the prospect of learning from
well-known professors will be appealing to many applicants, and enrollment will increase dramatically.
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