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Test What You Have Learned - Revising
What this test includes

In this test, you will be revising an essay that contains a variety of errors in its organization and development, as well as in the clarity and flow of ideas.
What You Will Do

Read the essay carefully and find and correct the problems with essay structure and development. If you need help identifying the problems, click on the TIPS button.

In the next screen, you will find three options to prepare your document.
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