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Essay #1

How can the content of Roger Gnoan M'Bala’s film Adanggaman be interpreted to demonstrate that the film is (or is not) an historically accurate representation of the slave trade in West Africa in the seventeenth century? For the purposes of this paper, the only history you need to know is contained in the course readings so far. We neither expect or want you to do outside research.

NOTE THE LANGUAGE OF THE QUESTION: "HOW CAN THE EVIDENCE...BE INTERPRETED TO DEMONSTRATE THAT..."

(hints: the above phrase suggests that your grade will reflect how persuasively you interpret the evidence, NOT whether or not you got the "right" answer. Further, we do NOT want a book-report summary of the readings so far; we want an assesment of the historical accuracy of the film based on the readings. Some questions you might ask yourself, "How and in what ways do aspects of the readings find reflection in the film?" "Are there aspects of the readings that contradict the film's portrayal of the slave trade?")

To receive full credit for this paper you must:

PAPERS THAT DO NOT IDENTIFY THE CLAIM/EVIDENCE/WARRANT UNITS WILL RECEIVE NO CREDIT. (We are serious)

1) underline your thesis
2) label your claim/evidence/warrant units (see below) with some clear system. For example, you might write (cl) or (ev) in the margins, or include the word (claim) before your claim.


3) cite all references from the course readings. Example: (Davidson, p. 17)

Writing Tips:

Sample -- if absurd --Thesis:

The historical accuracy of the film Adanggaman’s depiction of the slave trade in west Africa in the seventeenth century can be seen in the portrayal of alien space travel, frank acknowledgements of Saddam Hussein’s role, and….
1) you will need to organize your response around a thesis statement, which you must underline to get credit for the paper. As we discussed in class, your thesis must answer the "how and why" questions, rather than simply assert an observation. (See here for a refresher handout on the thesis statement.)

2) You must provide four points of evidence for your thesis.

3) In those paragraphs in which you present evidence (and only those paragraphs), be sure to use warrants to explain how the evidence you supply supports your thesis.

(See here for a discussion of how to handle evidence, including the use of warrants.)
(See here for an example of claim/evidence/warrant structure addressing Davidson.)

So, one way to organize your paper might be:

I. INTRODUCTION

A. Establish the context for your argument. What are (briefly) the important facts your audience must know to read further (No more than 3 sentences)
Example: The historical accuracy of the film Adanggaman’s depiction of the slave trade in west Africa in the seventeenth century can be seen in A, B,C, and D

B. Thesis


I I. Point A

A. Claim
B. Evidence
C. Warrant

III. Point B

A. Claim
B. Evidence
C. Warrant

III Point C

A. Claim
B. Evidence
C. Warrant

IV Point D

A. Claim
B. Evidence
C. Warrant

V Conclusion